Wednesday 28 March 2012


WALT create a narrative based on our artwork.

Jack O Lantern and his Great Adventure

Once upon a time their lived  a delicious,orange pumpkin his name was Jack o Lantern. He lived in a forest with all the other delightful  pumpkins.One spooky horror night he went out to Jurassic Park to trick the humongous dinosaurs.  When he went to Jurassic Park there were no dinosaurs in sight playing as usual because they were out hunting for food and showing T-Rex, who was new in town, around the Park.
 


Later on  T-Rex ,the dinosaur  appeared out of nowhere.Jack was not afraid but the dinosaur was starving.Jack thought he was just mucking around. But suddenly the dinosaur started chasing after him. Jack thought this was the end of his life.
Jack was crying ,‘’HELP,HELP’’, but no one could even hear him from far away. He was so tired that he was lucky enough to find a good cozy place  to rest. Jack looked to see if the coast was clear then Jack felt relieved, ‘’phew!” he said to himself as he was trying to catch his breath.

Early in the morning Jack woke up fresh and new. He made a plan to escape out of the forest while he was sleeping.He set up a trap to tie the ugly greedy dinosaur.When the   fierce dinosaur came he went straight into the piece of string  and  fell over on his side.Jack strapped him down to the ground then out of nowhere he just explodes.Jack was finally saved Jack shouted,‘’HOORAY,HOORAY’’he thought he’ll never survive from that horrible beast but he just needed to believe in him self. Then Jack went home and told all of the other roasted pumpkins about his great adventure with the dinosaur T- Rex.                                                                                                      
So Jack learnt to never go back to Jurassic park and trick the giant dinosaurs.                                            
                                                 THE END                         




                                                                              

Thursday 1 March 2012

All About Me


My name is Mehi Ake. I am 9 years old.I was born in July.I have four handsome brothers and a gorgeous sister. I live with my lovely mum, strong dad, beautiful sister and cool uncle.

I have dark brown, indulging eyes. They shine bright in the sun like diamonds. My hair is long and it goes very curly when I let it go. My skin is brown, smooth and very shiny. I am really tall just like my dad.
  
I am proud to be Tongan and I’m proud to be a beautiful Tongan girl. In my culture we eat taro, chop suey, cassava, corn beef, pork, chicken and all sorts of different delicious food. In Tonga we have a lot of entertainment to watch like hulas, traditional Tongan dance and singing

I enjoy cooking pancakes and going to school to learn with my new netbook. At home I play with my friends called Charday and Liantre.

My best friends are Malia, Charday, Maopa, Susana,Leigh Amber and Alison.They are my best friends because they always play with me.

My learning goal for this year is to achieve my writing goals. When I grow up I want to be a professional netball player so that I keep fit and healthy.