Thursday 20 June 2013

My Hero


My Hero

He is omniscient, pure, love, saviour and the One True God and Creator of the Universe and he is my hero. He creates this beautiful planet for us to live on.He would only give consequences to those that don’t obey him, believe in him or misuse his name He is a friend that everyone can talk to any time,and I can tell him anything and relying that he is not going to back stab me. He is such an awesome friend.



5 comments:

Anonymous said...

hi mehi I really like the way you said about god and I really like where you put fullstops and your capital letter.

Anonymous said...

Hey Mehi I like the way that you have used powerful words and capital letters in the right place. Your writing sound more interesting with the powerful words Keep it up!



















































Anonymous said...

Hey Mehi I really liked your work it has heaps of powerful words in it,Keep it up.

Anonymous said...

WOW Mehi,

I like how you used descriptive details, powerful words and more incredible language to develop this work. Keep up the great thinking Mehi. :-)

Anonymous said...

Hi Mehi,
I love how you use amazing powerful words.
I loved it how you said your Hero is God.
Keep up your amazing work.

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