Wednesday 27 March 2013

My Descriptive Writing

HappyEaster
One Easter morning the sun was shining brightly over the clouds and the breeze was flowing and drifting peacefully in the nice blue sky.
Everybody was rushing downstairs to eat breakfast when they can smell hot cross buns and freshly homemade pancakes with a drizzle of maple syrup that their next door just made from the maple tree near by.

After everyone finished breakfast everybody just rushed out the door and went out the backyard where all the Easter eggs were hidden ,they were going to play a game of Easter hunting.

It was very hard for the little ones but the older ones shared with the little ones and some of the little ones found some themselves.
After everyone had found all the Easter eggs in the backyard.

Then it was starting to get dark so everybody got inside washed themselves and went to bed but before they went to bed they were told what Easter really is about while they were eating Easter eggs.

Easter is all about how Jesus died for our sins because if he didn’t die for us we wouldn’t even be born and did you also know that Jesus’s hands was nailed on on a cross.

Then after three whole days Jesus lived again and came back alive and Mary who was Jesus’s mother was so cheerful to see her son again.The End

So the children learned that Easter isn’t about all the chocolate its was about Jesus and why he died for our sins.
So they had the most fun Easter they’d ever had in there whole entire life and never forgot the story of Easter and told it to their children when they were grown up.Also their children passed on the story to their own children and it went on and on and on until they all died it was just like the movie The Travelling Pants.

 

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